Week 13 Story: One True Love
She
lay wide awake, staring at the ceiling in frustration. The rough sheets scraped
across her skin, just barely hiding the fact her mattress was made of straw.
The cool night air felt crisp against her exposed skin. The nightgown she wore
was tattered and old. The promise of fall lingered in the air and she could
almost feel the leaves changing. She should be thankful the heat had finally
broke, but she couldn’t quiet her thoughts long enough to notice the change. Sleep
escaped her that night. High up in the servant’s tower, it was all she could to
but replay the last twelve hours of her life. Over and over and over again.
“Constance! Why don’t you ever listen to me? This is not
open for discussion!”
“But mother, I don’t understand WHY you won’t let me marry
him”
“Just trust me in this. You cannot and will not marry Elias
Fletcher!”
“That is not good enough! You have always said that when my love
knows no boundaries and my heart is overfilled with joy, this, this would be
the man I am to marry. I have found the one and now you tell me I cannot be wed?”
“Oh my dear, sweet child, I wish that I could impart to you
the knowledge of your past. There are things you don’t know. Things that are
working against you. I’m sorry my love, but this cannot happen.”
Sorrow filled Constance’s heart as her mother denied her the
one thing she had dreamed of since childhood. To marry Elias and honor him with
as many children that God see fit they have. She knew the bonds of marriage
were not always easy to uphold. But no matter what difficulties awaited them,
she knew that their love would conquer all.
She knew that sulking would get her nowhere. Determined to
find a way to convince her mother to change her mind, she wandered into the
stables to find her true love.
When she rounded the corner, she saw him. Tall and thin. His
baggy clothing hid his well chiseled features from his laborious work in the
stables. His hair was the color honeyed tea. His skin pale to match her own. But
what she loved about him the most were his eyes. They were as brilliant as the
sky on a clear spring day. But when he looked at her, he held her in his gaze
as if nothing or no one else existed. Her heart skipped a beat and her breaths
were shallow. After all this time, she was still a bundle of nerves when she
was around him.
He must have felt the electricity that was in the air when
they were together because he looked up from his current task. His smile began
to spread across his face and it melted her heart.
She hurriedly explained the
conversation with her mother over breakfast. Her words spilling out in a tangle
of emotions. She was scared and angry and confused. She didn’t understand why
her mother wouldn’t want a happy life for her. Elias assured her there must be
some kind of mistake. He promised they would speak with her father this evening
at dinner and get things sorted out. They would be wed in the center of town
during winter festival, surrounded by family and friends, just as they had
planned.
As the sun set and the evening was well under way, Constance
paced back and forth, anxiously awaiting the arrival of Elias. The sooner they
could get this sorted out, the sooner she could relax and bask in the thoughts
of being married. She had dreamed of being a wife one day. To raise a house
full of children and live out her days honoring her husband as the town elders
had promised.
When he finally arrived, he looked as nervous as she felt.
The two embraced each other with a sign of relief and entered through the
servant’s entrance and down the stairs to the kitchen. The smell of roasted
duck and fresh baked bread were enough to tease their minds away from any thoughts
of unpleasantry.
They braced themselves for the conversation ahead of them.
No matter what, they would love each other until they day they took their last
breaths.
After the meal was served and the wine was consumed, Elias
thought it a good time to broach the subject.
“Sir. Ma’am. You know that I love your daughter with
everything last beat of my heart. Please tell me why then won’t you let us be
wed?”
Constance’s parents looked at each other with grave
expressions. Her father sighed heavy, almost as if the weight of the world was
on his shoulders. And then explained.
“You see my dear boy, Constance is not of this world we live
in here. She is of noble blood. A highborn lady. She was brought here many years
ago when she was just a babe. Her father afraid his enemies would seek her out
and make an example of him. I’m sorry, but she is promised to another.”
The blood rushed to her head and
should could her heart beat in her ears. She couldn’t recall the rest of the
story of her arrival in this village. Her birthright was of nobility and she
was to leave this place within a fortnights time.
As she lay in bed that night, all she could do was blink in
disbelief. For eighteen years, she had lived the life of a ladies maid to the Baroness
of the village. Everything she knew was a lie. But worst of all, her knew
identity meant losing the one thing good in her life, Elias. Her heart ached.
Her chest felt hollow and her grief almost swallowed her hole. For tomorrow,
she would forever be known as Constance Everguard, Queen of the Seven Kingdoms.
Her life as she knew it was gone forever.
Author’s Note: This week I chose to retell my own version of
The Saviour of Dharma. When
Krishna would play his flute, all the girls in the village would dance and
flirt with him. But despite all the attention, he only had eyes for one. Radha.
He was madly in love with her and wanted to marry her. When he asked his
parents, he was told that he couldn’t. They brought him to the high priest in
the village and the priest explained to him that he was not of this world. Krishna
was a divine being and was an avatar of the God Vishnu. Because of this, his
destiny was to save the world and he couldn’t marry Radha. Krishna was crushed
but knew that it was his duty to live out his destiny.
In my story, Constance doesn’t know that she was born into a
royal family. She was brought to another village and raised by an adopted
family to protect her. She falls madly in love with Elias Fletcher and wants to
marry him. She begs her parents and they too tell her no. When she asks why,
they tell her that she is a highborn princess and that she cannot marry the
simple stable boy.
Title: Romeo and Juliet
Source: Flickr
In your retelling, with your character Constance being the one of an unknown origin of royalty it reminded me of Sleeping Beauty or Rapunzel a little bit even though you've chosen a picture of Romeo and Juliet to represent the couple who couldn't marry. This made me realize that Krishna's story-line isn't so different from these stories made famous here in the West! I love your storytelling style, there is almost nothing I could say as a suggestion since it's so well written.
ReplyDeleteHi Sarah! I think your retelling of "The Saviour of Dharma" is really good! I really liked the descriptive language you used, and the medieval vibe of the story was really good. You do a good job relating the story through the perspective of Constance, whose internal thoughts add a lot to the story and let the emotional part of the story come through. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHey Sarah,
ReplyDeleteI thoroughly enjoyed your rendition of "The Savior of Dharma." I appreciate that you incorporated a lot of drama into your story, which intensifies the emotions and draws the attention of the readers more. I like how you started and ended your story with Constance lying in bed; it is the same setting but elicits different emotions. Overall, great job on this story! I look forward to reading more stories written by you.
Hello Sarah,
ReplyDeleteI love how descriptive you are in all of your stories. It really draws me in as a reader and I am always excited to see what you have in store when I click on your profile. I am not sure why this story gave me princess diaries vibes but I really enjoyed it. Overall this was a really great story and I hope the rest of your semester is great.